My shape monster

L.I Can I use verbs and adjectives to make my writing more interesting?

I have a monster and her name is Row. Her head is shaped like circle and is blue. She has two triangle eyes and they are white. Row is  helpful. She likes to plant flowers.                                                                                                

Remembering Summer Poem

This week I have learnt to use verbs and adjectives to make my writing more interesting.

On Icy winter days,
my feet remember getting burnt on the sand,
my legs remember getting wet in the cold water,
my body remembers rolling across the sand, 
my hands remember grabbing sand, 
my face remembers going under water, 
my mind remembers summer will be back again soon.